Unit 5 — Political Discourse

Track E · Klasse 12 · Niveau E (Basisfach / Leistungsfach)

Template: Activate → Input → Practise → Produce → Reflect.
Niveau: E. Klausur (assessment) at Niveau E (90 BE).
Course tagging: basic course (Basisfach, E-BF) and advanced course (Leistungsfach, E-LF).

Learning objectives Link to heading

  • I can read / listen to a political speech and identify rhetorical moves (anaphora, antithesis, tricolon, frame-setting).
  • I can use the vocabulary of rhetorical analysis (ethos / pathos / logos, kairos, frame, register shift).
  • I can write a 400-word rhetorical-analysis essay.

curriculum framework (“Bildungsplan”) alignment Link to heading

  • 3.4.1 / 3.5.1 Soziokulturelles Orientierungswissen / Themen
  • 3.4.3.1 / 3.5.3.1 Hör-/Hörsehverstehen
  • 3.4.3.2 / 3.5.3.2 Leseverstehen
  • 3.4.4 / 3.5.4 Text- und Medienkompetenz

(Sources: https://www.bildungsplaene-bw.de/,Lde/LS/BP2016BW/ALLG/GYM/E1/IK/11-12-LF / https://www.bildungsplaene-bw.de/,Lde/LS/BP2016BW/ALLG/GYM/E1/IK/11-12-BF)

Lead-in story Link to heading

The class read three short speech excerpts from different decades and political camps: Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address (1863), Margaret Thatcher’s the lady’s not for turning (1980), and a 2024 climate speech by a 17-year-old delegate at COP30. Mr. Yilmaz framed the question: what makes each of these technically effective, regardless of whether you agree with the content?

1. Activate Link to heading

Rhetorical-move scan. With your partner, list 5 rhetorical moves you have noticed in speeches. Mark each as structural / lexical / acoustic.

2. Input Link to heading

Reading — three excerpts (paraphrased) Link to heading

Lincoln (1863): Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Thatcher (1980): To those waiting with bated breath for that favourite media catchphrase, the U-turn, I have only one thing to say. You turn if you want to. The lady’s not for turning.

COP30 delegate (2024): I am seventeen. The policy you write today is the policy I am eighty-two years old in. I would like, accordingly, to be more than a footnote in this room.

Vocabulary — rhetorical analysis Link to heading

ethos / pathos / logos, kairos (the right moment), anaphora (repeated opening), antithesis (balanced opposition), tricolon (three-part structure), parallelism, frame-setting, register shift, periodic sentence, asyndeton.

3. Practise Link to heading

Niveau E — controlled Link to heading

  1. Match: ethos → speaker’s authority; pathos → emotional appeal; logos → reasoned argument; kairos → timing.
  2. Identify: Four score and seven years ago uses what acoustic move? (parallelism / archaic register / both)

Niveau E — productive Link to heading

  1. For each excerpt, identify one structural and one lexical rhetorical move.
Answer key

Controlled. 1. all true. 2. archaic register (and also acoustic emphasis through the high vowels).

Productive. 3. Open.

4. Produce Link to heading

Rhetorical-analysis essay, 400 words. Pick one of the three excerpts. Identify ethos / pathos / logos balance + 3 specific rhetorical moves + 1 kairos observation. Use 4 integrated quotes + 6 academic discourse markers + 1 cleft.

Sample Link to heading

Margaret Thatcher’s 1980 the lady’s not for turning line is, technically, one of the most efficient lines of post-war British political rhetoric. The mechanics deserve close reading. The antithesis — “You turn if you want to. The lady’s not for turning” — sets up two grammatical subjects (you / the lady) and two contrastive verb phrases. Accordingly, the second clause borrows the energy of the first while inverting it; the audience laughs at the you, then registers the not before the speaker has to argue for it. Beneath the antithesis sits a deliberate register shift: the lady — third-person, stately, almost fairy-tale — replaces the expected first-person I. The shift performs a Thatcher-specific kind of ethos: she presents her position as institutional, as if the lady were not the speaker but the office. More specifically, the line is also a literary allusion to Christopher Fry’s 1948 play The Lady’s Not for Burning; the educated audience hears the reference, the wider audience hears the rhythm. Both registers do work simultaneously. By contrast with Lincoln’s high-pathos “conceived in Liberty”, Thatcher’s pathos is dry — almost an anti-pathos — and the line lands precisely because of the restraint. Logos is implicit rather than argued: the audience supplies the reasoning. Kairos is exemplary: October 1980, three months into a recession, with media speculation about a U-turn at its peak. It is precisely the timing that makes the antithesis political rather than literary. In this regard, the line is a small masterclass in compression. Ten words do the work that a paragraph of conventional defence would have done less well. The lesson, for the rhetorical analyst, is that the most-quoted lines in political speech almost always combine three moves at once.

5. Reflect Link to heading

  • I can identify ethos / pathos / logos balance and 3 specific rhetorical moves.
  • I can use 6+ rhetorical-analysis terms.
  • I can write a 400-word rhetorical-analysis essay.

One thing in your notebook: Write one sentence using something you learned in this Unit.

Exam example Link to heading

Klausur (assessment) — Niveau E (full paper, 90 BE)
Time. 4 hours including 20 minutes of breaks (220 active minutes). Total. 90 BE.
Inhalt / Sprache split. Basisfach (basic course): 50/50. Leistungsfach (advanced course): 40/60.

Part A — Comprehension (~24 BE) Link to heading

Listen / read twice.

“To those waiting with bated breath for that favourite media catchphrase, the U-turn, I have only one thing to say. You turn if you want to. The lady’s not for turning.”

  1. Speaker / year: ___ . 2. Antithesis: ___ . 3. Register shift: ___ . 4. Allusion: ___ .

Part B — Analysis (~18 BE) Link to heading

Read the three excerpts above.

  1. Lincoln archaic register: ___ . 2. Thatcher’s ethos move: ___ . 3. COP30 delegate’s frame-setting: ___ . 4. The kairos in each: ___ .

Part C — Composition (~18 BE) Link to heading

Composition prompt: Compare the rhetorical moves in Lincoln and the COP30 delegate in 250 words. Use 2 integrated quotes + 3 markers + 1 rhetorical-vocabulary term.

Mediation (~30 BE) Link to heading

Mediation prompt: A 250-word German Bundestag speech excerpt. Mediate the speaker’s rhetorical stance for an English-speaking political-rhetoric researcher. (Source provided in class.)

Expected-answer profile (Erwartungshorizont) — sample
Comprehension. 1. Thatcher 1980; 2. You turn ↔ The lady’s not for turning; 3. the lady (third-person, stately) for I; 4. Christopher Fry, The Lady’s Not for Burning (1948). Analysis. 1. Four score and seven years ago (biblical / register-elevating); 2. the lady — ethos as institutional; 3. the policy you write today is the policy I am eighty-two years old in (pathos + logos + age-frame); 4. Lincoln 1863 in war / Thatcher 1980 recession / COP30 2024 climate-action urgency. Composition. Open. Mediation. Open.
grading scale (Notenschlüssel) (von 90 BE)
| 86–90 | 1+ | 81–85 | 1 | 76–80 | 1- | | 71–75 | 2+ | 66–70 | 2 | 61–65 | 2- | | 56–60 | 3+ | 51–55 | 3 | 46–50 | 3- | | 41–45 | 4+ | 36–40 | 4 | 30–35 | 4- | | 22–29 | 5 | 0–21 | 6 | | |

Downloads Link to heading

**Slide deck timing.** 90 minutes total (Doppelstunde). Lead-in 6 min · Activate 8 min · Input 25 min · Practise 15 min · Produce 30 min · Reflect 6 min.

Differentiation. Basisfach (basic course): tighter argument, clearer moves. Leistungsfach (advanced course): sustained analysis, integrated quotation, complex thesis.

Common pitfalls Link to heading

  • Don’t reduce rhetoric to good / bad.
  • Pathos is not synonymous with manipulation.
  • Quote integration is part of the analysis, not a decoration.

Further reading / listening Link to heading

  • Sam Leith, You Talkin’ to Me? Rhetoric from Aristotle to Obama.
  • Brian MacArthur, The Penguin Book of Twentieth-Century Speeches.

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